Analysis of She's got you and I've got a hole in my heart

Audrey James 1955 (Los Angeles)



I found out today
That you won't come my way
Because yesterday
You picked your bride
It's a pain
A thorn in my side
Where do I start
Can I see things in plain sight
And a wicked we weaved
You fell in love
With the three faces of eve
I'm not such a wild pony
I only wanted you
For my one and only
I knew it would end from the start
She's got you
And I have a hole in my heart


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Poetic Form
Metre 11101 111111 0110 1111 101 01011 1111 1111011 001011 1101 1011011 111011 110101 111010 11111101 111 01101011
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 380
Words 89
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 17
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 287
Words per stanza (avg) 84
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Written on June 02, 2022

Submitted by gypsygreeneyes55 on June 02, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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