Analysis of at walgreens

t. g. molitor 1980 (tacoma)



standing opposite chocolate laxatives and baby wipes,

bladder control pads and acne scrubs,

mouthwashes and home perm kits,

I wait to pick up a drug of some generic name which

is suppose to make me feel less anxious

about our civilization being on the edge

of global nuclear annihilation.

Waiting also, at the very end of the line, an elderly lady,

a dromedary with hair like corkscrew pasta,  

hollers, out of nowhere,

and to no one in particular:

"I'm half-blind and half-deaf but fully insured."

We are waiting,

both of us are waiting,

for a prescription or for annihilation.

whichever comes first.


Scheme A A X X X X B X X X X X C C B X
Poetic Form
Metre 10100101000101 100110101 10111 11111011101011 1011111110 0110001010101 1101000010 101010101101110010 0100111110 10111 011100100 11101111001 1110 111110 10010110010 01011
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 660
Words 141
Sentences 6
Stanzas 16
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 30
Words per stanza (avg) 6

About this poem

This is a captured micro-moment I experienced and this woman said what she said and it struck me that we're both in the same situation even though we are entirely different people.

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Written on May 01, 2022

Submitted by on June 10, 2022

Modified on March 29, 2023

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