Analysis of Hold Ever So Proudly
Sally Khader 1998 (Alabama)
Burdens and traumas hold me so proudly,
Accompanied by the emptiness of staying, feeling but not realizing the stealing of peace.
Screaming but I feel speechless: grab me I am drowning.
Feeling my heart pounding,
I hold you so proudly.
Traumas are what we are made of.
I wish things were different, the difference of sameness.
I dream of the western winds
Where the light of the moon and the darkness of night collide
With the moving of waters, the suffocating thoughts of drowning begin.
Grab my heart while I drown.
Why haven’t I been found?
Stand-alone, rejected, trading joy for protection.
The pounding of truths finding the unfound
Wistfulness of denial with the fear of speaking and living
Assuming it won’t be good enough.
Our freedom is promised yet a promise to be broken.
Holding on to my traumas so dearly with the rejection of no return.
Holding ever so dearly to the melancholy of existence,
Moving mountains under water,
Maintaining the power to breathe.
Grasp this and find the layers of existence.
My soul is jealous of my body to trade peace for protection.
My heart pounding and pounding.
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Metre | 1001011110 010010100110101110001011 1011110111110 101110 111110 10111111 11101000100110 1110101 10110100101101 10101100100111001 111111 11111 1010101011010 010111001 1001010101110010 010111101 101011010101110 1011110110100101101 1010110101001010 10101010 01001011 11010101010 1111011101111010 1110010 |
Closest metre | Iambic hexameter |
Characters | 1,123 |
Words | 213 |
Sentences | 17 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 24 |
Lines Amount | 24 |
Letters per line (avg) | 37 |
Words per line (avg) | 8 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 888 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 191 |
About this poem
Writing poetry is a practice, a discipline to help keep my heart and mind open. It’s also a form of prayer at times. I write poetry to be understood, first and foremost by myself. For me, writing poetry is about naming my scattered emotions that live like blind crustaceans in the deep-sea part of me.
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Written on February 02, 2022
Submitted by sallykhader on July 02, 2022
Modified by sallykhader on July 24, 2022
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