Analysis of Him



Blame
All the way to suspecting
Sharpening blades of hating
Made of gold
Your eyes are amazing
As hands slide down my thighs
I think of our lost summer nights
Alone in dark like quiet lake
My feelings are spilling out mistakes
What we make
Shape me into your Aphrodite
Your knife in my back
Feel words in my heart
Heat is hitting my head
Nothing makes me more upset
The stare up and nor or down
North I'm going with my spam
Poems that wrote was a scam
Then reminded of vivid dreams
Butterflies are settling on my skin
Void has filled ceiling
No more thoughts were receiving
Messages sent, unopened and expired
Milk in my virgin blood of loving
I quit and you got hired


Scheme ABBCBDEFGFHIJKLMNNOPBBQBR
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 1 1011010 1001110 111 111010 111111 111101101 01011101 110110101 111 11011010 11011 11011 111011 1011101 0110111 1110111 1011101 10101101 101100111 11110 1110010 1001010001 101101110 1101110
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 686
Words 145
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 25
Lines Amount 25
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 540
Words per stanza (avg) 127

About this poem

Basically my ex came back and i can't say no, i still love him. I know he's bad for me, but got do i crave venom right now

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Written on May 30, 2022

Submitted by jancenkovaiteievamaja on June 20, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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