Analysis of The Beach— Where You Like to be Barefoot

Aasiyah 2006 (USA)



What's crazy is that—
Sometimes I still wear that dress.

The dress that made you leave.
And I don't feel a single thing.

In fact,
I feel comfortable wearing this dress.
It makes me look and feel beautiful.

It supports my breasts; it's loose.

It's white, and blue, and black.
It has two strings with silver beads on it.

I wear this dress
and it's like nothing ever happened.

Because it happened to me,
not the dress.

I defy the existence of the painful past
with the wearing of this dress

because I never associated any of the abuse
with this mere piece of fabric.

This is my dress.
My grandmother bought it for me.

And it reminds me of the beach


Scheme XA XX XAX B XX AX CA XA BX AC X
Poetic Form
Metre 11011 0111111 011111 01110101 01 1110001011 111101100 1011111 110101 1111110111 1111 011101010 0111011 101 101001010101 1010111 011100100101001 1111110 1111 1101111 01011101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 659
Words 149
Sentences 14
Stanzas 11
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 3, 1, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 45
Words per stanza (avg) 11

About this poem

A dress— blue, black, and white, with a deep V cut. and two strings. It's short and soft.

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Written on June 15, 2022

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Modified by on June 15, 2022

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