Analysis of Saša Milivojev - THE PUNISHMENT



(On the consequences of biological warfare and experimentation on humans. Disturbing images in verse)

What is the world breathing in?
We are perishing,
Dirty rains are falling,
Poisons and genes,
Rodents and savages,
The tailed and the horned.

These are not the bacteria nor the viruses
nor the “Conspiracy Theories”,
But Satan’s blood thirsty savages,
Monstrosities from the laboratories.

With a head of the child
and a body of a snake
He is mourned by his mother,
He doesn’t even resemble the old man
- the horned goat - his father.

Millions of ex-people
witlessly meandering the planet,
on all fours! Invertedly.
At times someone even flies,
reversedly.

Jumping locusts,
We’re becoming crickets,
Rodents and cripples,
Vaccinated monkeys,
hair-covered in the scorched rainforests.
Babies are no longer crying,
Only frogs can be heard croaking!

How wicked have we become,
We are the monstrosities,
In the fires of Hell
on roasts we shall turn,
Extinguishing with our tears
and our blood the flames
that forever will burn.
Is this the end?
- It’s not the end.
The end with the punishment
will not come to an end.

Translated by Ljubica Yentl Tinska


Scheme A XBBXCX CDCD XXEXE FXFXF GXXDGBB XAXHXXHIIXI B
Poetic Form Tetractys  (28%)
Etheree  (25%)
Metre 1010010100100001011001010001 1101100 11100 101110 1001 100100 01001 1110010010100 10010010 11110100 110100 101101 0010101 1111110 1110010011 011110 101110 10100010 1111 111101 1 1010 001010 10010 100010 11000110 10111010 10111110 1101101 1101 001011 11111 01001101 010101 101011 1101 1101 0110100 111111 01011101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,220
Words 239
Sentences 15
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 1, 6, 4, 5, 5, 7, 11, 1
Lines Amount 40
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 114
Words per stanza (avg) 24
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Modified on March 05, 2023

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Saša Milivojev

Saša Milivojev is a famous writer, poet, journalist columnist and political analyst... One of the most read columnists in Serbia, he is the author of five books, and numerous columns published in various daily newspapers. He is the author of the novel “The Boy from the Yellow House” and of political speeches. His work has been translated into around twenty languages across the world. more…

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