Analysis of Away



I wish I may, I wish I might.
Have this wish I wish tonight.
Do dreams come true?
Tell me, I wish I knew.
Let it be.
Take my hand and fly with me.
To another land where peace is free.
Come with me.
Eden, Atlantis, or just Paradise.
See it and believe.
Where the strong and the weak,
our brothers pacted by love.
I visit there every night.
The path is beyond, into your second sight.
Open your mind to grow and bond.
Set your mind free, into the unknown.
Soon you'll believe, the way has been shown.
Maybe I'll see you there.
In that place so fair.


Scheme AABBCCCCDEFGAAHIIJJ
Poetic Form
Metre 11111111 1111101 1111 111111 111 1110111 101011111 111 100101110 11001 101001 1010111 11011001 01101011101 10111101 111101001 110101111 101111 01111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 547
Words 127
Sentences 18
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 19
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 411
Words per stanza (avg) 109

About this poem

From a time when I was naive.

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Written on June 10, 2022

Submitted by TaurusUnlimited on June 10, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Brien Lee

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