Analysis of I should’ve never fell in love!

Araceli Morones 1987 (Los Angeles)



Roses are red &  violets are blue
I should’ve never fell in love with you.
You did me wrong by breaking my heart.
I thought I warned you, never cross that line.
I thought you loved me and I was the one,  never did it cross my mind, you would damage me so much.
Pictures and memories is all I have, of the days you and I became one.
I close my eyes and I could feel your touch, your lips touching mine and almost smell your cologne as if you were by my side.
I fell for your sweet smile and your passionate touch, but I was way off from whom you really are.
You said we were a family and I believed it, but baby there’s no family without a man who doesn’t respect the woman by his side.
Your story shall be told and I can only imagine I’ll always be the monster who broke your heart, but a good loving woman like me you will never find & if you do best of luck.


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Poetic Form Etheree  (20%)
Metre 101110011 111010111 111111011 1111110111 111110110110111111110111 1001001111101101011 1111011111111010111011110111 11111101100111111111101 11100100010111101110001011101010111 11011101110010111010111110110101111101111111
Characters 876
Words 187
Sentences 10
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 10
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 66
Words per line (avg) 18
Letters per stanza (avg) 658
Words per stanza (avg) 180

About this poem

It’s dedicated to someone I was recently in a relationship with & fell in love. It’s based on my before and now emotions from the man I fell in love with to the man I got to know and almost married.

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Written on May 08, 2022

Submitted by Amorones428 on May 09, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Araceli Morones

I love poetry it’s always been my pasión just never taken the time to in-force it. Hope one day I’ll be known and admired for my work and dedication to such beauty in life which is poetry. more…

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