Analysis of Distance



Those memories of you  

Like the sunshine

Mudpies in the sand and making saltine delicacies  

I remember the junkyard and fears and us making up games to “save us”

Mama, You, Me

One two three shadows, and the fourth a quieted alert to keep the unknowns in view  

Now these are all that are left of us  

What we were  

Not Three, Not Two, Just one left to count  

No one replaces the space it just helps us grow closer to the other side

The distance between the living grows with every loss  

I see that now

We will meet again.  


Scheme A X X B X A B X X X X X X
Poetic Form
Metre 110011 101 100101011000 10100101011011111 1011 11110010100011100101 111111111 110 111111111 1101001111111010101 01001010111001 1111 11101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 549
Words 125
Sentences 2
Stanzas 13
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 31
Words per stanza (avg) 8

About this poem

Memories of being a child in SE DC and its challenges

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Written on May 25, 2022

Submitted by thejadelotus on May 25, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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