Analysis of Surviving
Why do people always want to know what I’m doing with my life or where I’m living?
They say that I don’t know what I want to do and that my life is a waste; I better figure it out soon.
Well, this is what I say:
Have you ever walked in my shoes, been loved and been hated?
Were you born to my mother, and did you suffer what I suffered on a daily?
Were you burned by fire? Did you see the flame?
Were you scorned by your peers?
I tell you what, it hurts just the same.
Just one more mental anguish to overcome ALONE!
Were you violated as a child by those who didn’t know you and those who did?
Did you fight for love and for life even though you were just a kid?
Did you think of suicide although you were too young to comprehend the cause and effect?
Did you understand its severity and what it really meant?
Did you have no self-esteem, because no one ever told you what it was?
Did you wander the streets aimlessly, lost and confused through all the drama and the drugs?
You see, I am that I am and I will continue to do what I do…
Searching for a higher power, to help get me through
each day
Understanding who I am, and that each night I have to
pray
Realizing the realities of a harsh world
Visualizing a better future
Increasing my chances for success, by gaining more
knowledge with an open mind
Venerate my elders, respect them, and honor them
Imperfect, understanding that I am
Never giving up on myself, or those I love
Guiding those that I can
So, you want to know what I’m doing in my life,
I Am Surviving!
By: Shannon M. Jenkins
Date: May 10, 2000
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 11101111111011111110 11111111111011110111010111 111111 11101011110110 01111100111011101010 01111011101 011111 111111101 111101011001 0110001011111110111 1111101110110101 1111101101110101001 110110100011101 111110101111011111 111001100100111010001 111111101101011111 1010101011111 11 0101110111111 1 1000101011 10001010 0101101011101 1011101 101100110101 010010111 10101111111 101111 111111110011 11010 110110 11 |
Closest metre | Iambic hexameter |
Characters | 1,764 |
Words | 346 |
Sentences | 18 |
Stanzas | 6 |
Stanza Lengths | 3, 13, 12, 1, 1, 2 |
Lines Amount | 32 |
Letters per line (avg) | 38 |
Words per line (avg) | 10 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 202 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 52 |
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Written on May 10, 2000
Submitted by smmjenkins44 on June 07, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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