Analysis of I Saw Her Waiting



Hot concrete from a sweltering day, pressed against her once-white shoes.

Even though the bus don't come, she's paying reverence in the pews.

Reclining there against the glass, a broken string of pearls.

Only now her eyes are set, on distant far-off worlds.

In this way, she still stays... forever now at peace.

No. In this way, she has no pain... forever now deceased.


Scheme A A X X X X
Poetic Form
Metre 1011010011010111 1010111110100001 01010101010111 1010111110111 011111010111 10111111010101
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 375
Words 74
Sentences 9
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 6
Letters per line (avg) 47
Words per line (avg) 11
Letters per stanza (avg) 47
Words per stanza (avg) 11
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Written on June 05, 2022

Submitted by dante_unknown on June 05, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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