Analysis of The Old Sojourner
Oh to be a poet and write an ode
Inspiration comes in deep moments of thought,
For vital words that make you think, I am told
Must be in a life, tried and tested, to be sought.
Sometimes things are not always what they should be,
The seasons of life come and go,
Our lives are an open book for others to see
Full of good memories, and some not so.
Time moves so slowly and time can do so much
Tis true, and a wonderful ballad to hear,
Music makes the world go around as such
If you have a listening ear.
The many years can be bittersweet,
Reflections of the past seem greater day by day,
Life is fleeting, the past is long, that is my beat,
Everyone travels this road, one would say.
But this much traveled road, I trod,
It's my own journey, I made it so,
This life I put forward is my abode,
No regrets, it is a natural flow.
God is my oath, the meaning of her name,
To have a family, I am indeed so blest,
There are moments of bliss, but it will not be the same,
But in the end, it is for the best.
Three score and ten, a normal life I am told,
Even four score by means of life so strengthen,
Devoted words to say, to have and to hold
And I love you, these words never to be forsaken.
My future is so very bright,
I yearn for that celestial shore,
For I have trusted the One in Heavenly sight,
For my weary soul has wings to soar.
God has a wonderful Home for us before death,
In His Word, He has promised to all mankind
For those who truly believe in Him, we are blest,
Just look up in the Bible - John 3 :16, life's final sign !
Scheme | ABCB DEDE FGFG HIHI XEAE JKJK CLCL MNMN XXKX |
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Poetic Form | Quatrain (89%) |
Metre | 1110100111 0101011011 11011111111 110011010111 0111111111 01011101 1011110111011 1111000111 11110011111 11001001011 1010110111 11101001 01011110 010101110111 111001111111 101011111 11110111 111101111 1111101101 1011101001 1111010101 110100110111 1110111111101 100111101 11010101111 10111111110 01011111011 0111111011010 11011101 11110101 111100101001 111011111 110100111011 01111101111 111100101111 111001011101 |
Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 1,543 |
Words | 349 |
Sentences | 9 |
Stanzas | 9 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4 |
Lines Amount | 36 |
Letters per line (avg) | 32 |
Words per line (avg) | 9 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 129 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 35 |
About this poem
Your life as an old traveler
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Written on June 02, 2022
Submitted by Dougla$Irishman on June 02, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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