Analysis of Til you
Til you,
My heart had lost its smile …
It lost the ability to see,
The rays of sun, that you feel,
on a warm summers day..
Til you,
Life had come to a standstill,
It had lost all meaning…
Heartache and tears,
Only time to kill…
Til you,
I didn’t believe,
My heart, would ever feel again..
It was only then,
That it was because,
Of you..
Your voice whispering,
I also love you…
Whispering in the wind.
| Scheme | AbcdeAfghfAijjkagal |
|---|---|
| Poetic Form | |
| Metre | 11 111111 110010011 0111111 101101 11 111101 111110 101 10111 11 1101 11110101 11101 11101 11 11100 11011 100001 |
| Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
| Characters | 413 |
| Words | 93 |
| Sentences | 5 |
| Stanzas | 1 |
| Stanza Lengths | 19 |
| Lines Amount | 19 |
| Letters per line (avg) | 16 |
| Words per line (avg) | 4 |
| Letters per stanza (avg) | 297 |
| Words per stanza (avg) | 79 |
About this poem
My husband passed in 2021. I was devastated and I Thought I’d never love again. But it’s amazing how life shows you the most beautiful surprises sometimes. Because I’ve met someone that has given my heart a reason to smile again.
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Written on May 26, 2023
Submitted by RemisGiGi on May 26, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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