Analysis of Starry star



For the 1st girl I sat next to on a rock in Karratha..

When I take to bush
with modern swag
To gaze upon a Starry night
Leaving cares and phone behind
The smell of wild and dust
flows over me I roll onto my side  I ponder

If only I could do this 'midst the hectic city life
But ceaseless noise and cluttered thoughts
Always to remind
Due in the morning
Don't leave that behind
Cannot fail to meet the deadline will I finish it
in time?

Oh cease this endless Cacophany that swirls
Around my head like an
urban willy willy its Twists
its Turns confound me I don't
want to leave the confines of my safe and quiet  warmth
and unsaid clarity  a piece full of serenity  my comfy single bed


Scheme A XBXCXX XXCBCXX XXXXAX
Poetic Form Etheree  (30%)
Metre 1011111110101 11111 1101 11010101 1010101 011101 1101111011110 11011111010101 11010101 1101 10010 11101 101110111101 01 11110111 011111 10101011 1101111 111011110101 00110001110100110101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 701
Words 143
Sentences 3
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 1, 6, 7, 6
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 135
Words per stanza (avg) 35

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For the 1st girl I sat next to on a rock in Karratha

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Written on May 26, 2022

Submitted by pearcemelville on May 26, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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