Analysis of Saddened Soul

Mark D. Vizzini 1959 (New Orleans)



He had such high hopes for his life,
Marriage, family and many friends.
He wanted to be an artist, a racer
... to be someone loved.

He had the love of some, at least a few;
And still others knew his love,
Though it was unreciprocated or inadequate
Some aspirations saw moderate success
Yet many mistakes were made
...too many to count

Ideals once precious, were not for this time
And most of what was important was lost.
Beleaguered by societal parasites,
He succumbed, bit by bit.
Nearly all has faded, the embers cooled
The dreams replaced by regrets
And the saddened soul now weeps
...too distant to be heard.


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Poetic Form
Metre 11111111 101000101 11011110010 1111 1101111101 0110111 111110100 1010110001 1100101 11011 0111001111 0111101011 0101010010 101111 1011100101 011101 0010111 110111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 615
Words 120
Sentences 8
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 6, 8
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 160
Words per stanza (avg) 37

About this poem

It’s the autobiographical abyss of depression.

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Written on September 01, 2002

Submitted on May 20, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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