Analysis of BURN UNIT
Welcome to the 5th floor burn unit,
UCSD Medical Center.
This is the sign you pass,
As you enter.
They ask what happened,
How did you get burned?
They do this all with
Care and concern.
On a scale of 1 to 10,
Where is your level of pain?
I'm cussing, swearing,
I cry and complain.
They whisk me away to a place,
They call wound care.
Nothing here is familiar,
I'm not yet aware.
Wound care is a special place,
Full of pain and narcotics.
Stool softeners and I.V.'s with
Liquid antibiotics.
They scrub the burns with
Soap and water.
It's like leading the lamb
To the slaughter.
The cries and screams,
You can hear down the halls.
They bounce and echo,
Off these walls.
You end up in a realm of awe,
For the angels that work in this place.
The scrubbing of the burns,
You learn to embrace.
This is where you find out,
You have nerves of steel.
There is a method to the magic,
In this place to heal.
Scheme | XAXA XXBX XCXC DEAE DFBF BAXA XGXG XDXD XHXH |
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Poetic Form | Quatrain (89%) |
Metre | 1010111110 110010 110111 1110 11110 11111 11111 1001 10111 1111011 11010 11001 11101101 1111 1011010 11101 1110101 1110010 11011 100010 11011 1010 111001 1010 0101 111101 11010 111 11100111 101011011 010101 11101 111111 11111 110101010 01111 |
Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 985 |
Words | 221 |
Sentences | 21 |
Stanzas | 9 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4 |
Lines Amount | 36 |
Letters per line (avg) | 19 |
Words per line (avg) | 5 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 76 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 19 |
About this poem
A trip to the emergency room and they sent me to the 5th floor Burn Unit. I dumped boiling water on myself.
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Written on April 30, 2022
Submitted by Turbo1904 on May 11, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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