Analysis of Oh Sun-



Oh sun- please come out,
Outside is very cold,
The darkness makes me pout,
Oh please bring out your gold;

Let your light shine on my face,
Spread your warmth everywhere,
Let the flowers laugh,
Bring some joy into this place,
Take us out of our despair,
Let grass grow on this stone cold path!


Scheme ABAB CDXCDX
Poetic Form Etheree  (40%)
Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 11111 111101 010111 111111 1111111 11110 10101 1110111 11111001 11111111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 293
Words 65
Sentences 1
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 4, 6
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 114
Words per stanza (avg) 28

About this poem

This poem is about embracing the joy that the Sun brings.

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Written on April 25, 2022

Submitted by ABruno on May 10, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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