Analysis of Rocks, The Cradles Of Creation, Nourishing Life Times



Rocks, The Cradles Of Creation, Nourishing Life Times

Four score and four billion years ago, our solar system, just a dream
Born from a swirling cosmic dust storm, five trillion miles across
From dust, on to planet size balls of rock, a few with liquid cores
Some have radioactive cores that heat the entire planet, an internal sun
Others not so lucky, plain old metals and rock, cooling down to frozen
But the magic ones, hot forever, start out life, boiling molten rock

Oceans of volcanoes, rising out of screaming clouds of meteors, and comets
The dust filled comets pounding, cooling the surface, frozen water rocks
Oceans of water, packed inside life giving rocks, slowly squeezes out
The grinding starts, massive conveyor belts, reblending the rocky crust
Surfaces sucked below, the underground rises up, sunlight hidden by dust
Grinding rocks, bumping, elbowing for room, making cool cosmic dust

Cosmic dust, the stuff dreams of life are made of, thicken like a good gravy
From comets and meteors, sediments and clay, picking up cosmic lint
The chemicals of life, creating single cell creatures that churn out mud
Filling the cracks in the hard rock lands, dirt, the first pollutant appears

The oceans cradled in rock beds, peacefully snoring, oxygen all tied up
Bound up inside rocks and water, the oxygen waits, the great trickster
At the two billion year mark, one microbial family starts exhaling oxygen
The second great pollutant, now underway, the rest is history


Scheme X XXXAAX XXXBBB CXXX XXAC
Poetic Form
Metre 1010101010011 110110101101010101 110101011110101 1111101111011101 11001011100101010101 101110111001101110 10101101011110101 10101010111011100010 01110101001010101 10110101110110101 010110010110101 10010101010111011 101101011101101 101011111111010110 110010010001101101 010011010101101111 10010011110101001 010101110010100111 11011010010010110 10110111010010011100 0101010101011100
Characters 1,480
Words 249
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 1, 6, 6, 4, 4
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 57
Words per line (avg) 12
Letters per stanza (avg) 238
Words per stanza (avg) 49

About this poem

Hot stellular dust condenses into rock globes that transform into the stage of life, unraveling show after show.

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Written on 2019

Submitted by rzwilling on May 08, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

1:14 min read
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Robert Zwilling

Robert Zwilling is digital artist and environmental poet who uses verbal brush strokes to illustrate life in the Natural World using jazz style text and pictures. more…

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