Analysis of PTSD Warriors
Met a true comrade who honoured me with a great honour.
After he listened to confessions of my finest hours,
He saw me as a veteran, called me a true one percenter.
As we shared the horrors of each of our stories,
Then stared in honour of each of our courage.
Taken back was I, the surreal feel of this moment.
Quickly I grasped at the impact of his statements,
For years I had worn the same PTSD label,
Being pigeon holed as the most mentally unstable.
Both of us fighting a battle for normality,
In a body that failed because of burnt out nerve endings.
One of us proud to protect and honour our country,
One of us proud to survive some of your nightmares.
Without unconditional love from an army of people,
Or the total cost of the devastation that’s happened.
PTSD will destroy every fine person,
Beyond recognition of the person they once were.
To put a measure or compare our battles,
Is not something that can be measured with whose hell.
Instead recognising that we all face challenges,
That took away our ability to find comfort.
Opening our eyes to the depth of destruction,
To our lives, our families and friends.
Living on survival mode just trying to stay here.
Fighting not only with the constant triggers,
Flashbacks, memory loss, lots of aches and confusion.
Paranoia, fear, causing your worst kind of delusions.
Pills, pills, pills, you need to be heavily sedated!
Yet free to heal with patience and understanding.
Don’t get ahead of yourself, you have not quite suffered enough yet!
Although we recognise you have been through quite a bit,
You know unless you are one of the easy, not too broken,
We won’t waste our time trying to mend the unspoken.
Your epic life will just be another wasted token,
And a reminder that you will soon be forgotten.
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 10111111011 101101010111010 11110100110111 1110101111010 11011111010 1011100111110 101110011110 1111101110 10101101100010 111100101100 00101101111110 1111101011010 11111011111 01010011110110 1010110010110 1101100110 010101010110 110101011010 111011110111 0111111100 11011001001110 1001011011010 11011010001 1010101110111 10110101010 110011110010 0101101111010 1111111100010 11111100010 1101101111110011 1111111101 110111110101110 11110110110010 11011110101010 0001011111010 |
Closest metre | Iambic heptameter |
Characters | 1,778 |
Words | 354 |
Sentences | 21 |
Stanzas | 5 |
Stanza Lengths | 6, 7, 6, 8, 8 |
Lines Amount | 35 |
Letters per line (avg) | 40 |
Words per line (avg) | 9 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 280 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 63 |
About this poem
I wrote this poem in honour of a friend who served i as a peacekeeper in East Timor.
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Written on November 11, 2016
Submitted by Neomortalgirl on April 21, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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