Analysis of Her Dreams



The dreams she had as a kid were to have a city of her own, own several businesses and help everyone that needed help. Her ultimate goal was to change the world piece by piece. The dreams she had as a kid, never came true. It was like she just wasted so much time, helping others with no one to help her. Everyone took her for a joke instead of really investing in her goals. She cried & cried her heart out because noone recognized her worth.  Even still, she decided to support others in every way she can. Never got that back in return but she never gave up or gave in. The dreams she had as a kid seemed impossible to obtain and complete to win a victory. Her heart was purer than gold. They all knew she was dependable, reliable and independent. All she knew was stay strong until she wins. Until, one day that strength was no longer, so it came to an end. -Poetic ER


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Characters 872
Words 170
Sentences 14
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 1
Lines Amount 1
Letters per line (avg) 680
Words per line (avg) 171
Letters per stanza (avg) 680
Words per stanza (avg) 171

About this poem

This writing is about a girl who had dreams and just couldn't complete because her depression took over.

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Written on April 09, 2022

Submitted by resume0809 on April 11, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Poetic ER

Born and raised in Boston, Massachusetts. I started writing poems as an outlet, when I was 11 years old and just continued on. I think I have evolved to spoken word. Soon hoping to have several short books of life. more…

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