Analysis of alternative forms of falling
in the way a gentle river loves
her embankments keeping her at bay
a tender caress for her lovely lover
a touch to soften dirt walls
and how a package loves
the funny tickle of packing peanuts
lowered from warm grasp
to their little playful kisses
and how the sweltering sun loves
the familiar greeting of the horizon
band-aids, cold compress to the brow
whispered praise and all is well
and the dandelions struggling in a lot
cracking through stone to reach the sun
resilient and in them,
a flicker of eternal flame
forged and found and
love fiery with spitting sparks
popping of bones crackle of wood
a lighthouse in the dark
this is a love that bleeds through pages
pooling into puddles that stain the skin
holding the pulsing folded heart
cupped by gentle hands
like when Prometheus made man
infused with heavenly fire
Scheme | AXBX AXXC ADXX XDXX XXXX CXXXXB |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 001010101 001010011 01001101010 0111011 010101 0101011010 10111 11101010 01010011 00101010010 11110101 1010111 00100100001 10111101 010001 01010101 1010 11001101 10111011 01001 110111110 1001101101 10010101 11101 11111 01110010 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 827 |
Words | 152 |
Sentences | 1 |
Stanzas | 6 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 6 |
Lines Amount | 26 |
Letters per line (avg) | 26 |
Words per line (avg) | 6 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 112 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 24 |
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Written on December 21, 2021
Submitted by willothewisp on April 15, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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