Analysis of A toast to empty promises



My heart flutters, for just a brief moment. The thought of
Our lips pressing deeply into one another.
I truly believe, that when the desire is quenched,
my heart will start again.
You will set me free.
No longer bound by the shackles of lonely nightfalls,
or the isolated release of dawn,
my lips remain parched, awaiting your blissful kiss.


Scheme ABCDEFGF
Poetic Form
Metre 1110110110011 1011010011010 1100111001011 111101 11111 110110101101 101000111 110110101101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 348
Words 66
Sentences 6
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 8
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 34
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 271
Words per stanza (avg) 60
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Written on May 08, 2022

Submitted by aprivera1432 on May 08, 2022

Modified on March 20, 2023

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Antonius

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