Analysis of Ode to Sappho, You & I



I will go on and
Continue
When you move on

In the moon painting oceans white
memories of you filter in

Daffodils, anemone, irises
Rhododendron, crocus, coleus,

When the plankton carry the red tide
On their green backs
And spread glowing turquoise embers
Across the black and silent ocean
Colors of memories of labors brush the heavy sky

Petunia, phlox, lantana
Toad lilies, beards tongue, fuscia

Tables with three empty seats
One setting and accoutrements
Lonely and alone I eat
The sun blinds glasses open
Yet memories kindle agreements
With splashes of more of shared digging

Peruvian lilies, heliopsis, campanula
Helianthus, hibiscus, Echinacea

The moon rides the tail of the sun
Here comes the salt of the work
It drips into my vision
Muses play harps in Lydian
Thoughts the chest does jerk
And here you follow the moon
Lyre constellation
In my dark night sky of unfolding

Monarda, marguerite, Montana
Chrysanthemum, pin cushion, lobelia

And as I turn, there is no image
There is no you
And what we were flowers again

Without a copse
Without a song
Without movement

No stag
No hunter
No forest


Scheme XAX XX BX XXXCX DX XEXCEF GD CHCAHXCF DG XAX BXX XXX
Poetic Form
Metre 11110 010 1111 00110101 10011100 1010100 01010100 101010011 1111 01101010 010101010 10110011010101 01001010 110111 1011101 11000100 1000111 0111010 110010010 110111110 01001011 1100100 01101101 1101101 1101110 101101 10111 0111001 1010 011111010 101010 01001101 011111110 1111 01101001 0101 0101 0110 11 110 110
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,118
Words 202
Sentences 1
Stanzas 12
Stanza Lengths 3, 2, 2, 5, 2, 6, 2, 8, 2, 3, 3, 3
Lines Amount 41
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 74
Words per stanza (avg) 16

About this poem

"This is the end, beautiful friend. This is the end, my only friend...." JMorrison

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Written on February 18, 2022

Submitted by ScottMPotter on May 07, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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