Analysis of 12:34 am



when it was my sixteenth birthday, I wished for you to like me back
on my seventeenth birthday, I blew out the candles on the cake wishing for us to be together forever
now it’s my eighteenth, you’re not here
but my wish will still be you no matter what


Scheme ABCD
Poetic Form
Metre 111101111111111 111011111010101101111010010 11101111 11111111101
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 261
Words 53
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 4
Lines Amount 4
Letters per line (avg) 50
Words per line (avg) 13
Letters per stanza (avg) 199
Words per stanza (avg) 50
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Submitted by jaxonhurst on May 05, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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