Analysis of In Loving Memory...



Dedicated to Richard Weaver

In Loving Memory…

At 8 a.m. on April 27th…
I got word that my best friend and little brother had gone to Heaven.

I cannot believe how hard it hit…
I felt ill, sad and claustrophobic.

Being ill was only a sign…
That he would prove to be the strongest man ever alive.

He smiled day in and day out…  He always offered everyone help.

I appreciate everything he has ever done…
He was my go to guy, and we always had fun.

I wish I would have hugged him one last time…
I was in denial that it was his time.

His children are so precious and young…
I hope they grow knowing how much they were loved.

Richard AKA Ricky I've known since he was only 15…
My heart hurts knowing the distance in between.

He is no longer in pain…
       He is reunited with his brother,
       Billy once again.

RIP My Friend …

Written By Heidi Sayles


Scheme A B XC XX XX X CC DD XX BX XAX X X
Poetic Form
Metre 100011010 010100 1111011 11111110101011110 110011111 11110010 10111001 11111101011001 11100111110101 10101011101 11111101111 1111111111 11001011111 110111001 11111011101 1010101111110 11110010001 1111001 110101110 10101 111 101101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 949
Words 195
Sentences 12
Stanzas 13
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 2, 2, 2, 1, 2, 2, 2, 2, 3, 1, 1
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 49
Words per stanza (avg) 13

About this poem

Dedicated to my best friend, little brother, Richard A Weaver, whom passed away at the age of 34.

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Written on May 02, 2022

Submitted on May 03, 2022

Modified on April 12, 2023

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