Analysis of Distracted Prayers



The clock ticks the sound of distractions.
My mind wanders across imaginary chasms.
The Lord remains silent and I grow ever more weary.
What am I doing wrong to make this Christian life so dreary?
I dream of a time in a future garden.
Face to face, a heart no longer hardened.


Scheme AABBCD
Poetic Form
Metre 011011010 11100101001 01011001110110 111101111101110 11101001010 1110111010
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 276
Words 57
Sentences 6
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 6
Lines Amount 6
Letters per line (avg) 36
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 218
Words per stanza (avg) 52
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Submitted by RaschelleM on May 02, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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