Analysis of Breath In Braille



I miss how you would worry
Through the smiles we would speak
I miss how I would simply know
That you were in love with me

But now I breath in braille
To read your micro thoughts
I never hear a difference
Because we speak not really talk

I can feel the way you struggle
And how much hurt you have
I can sense the soft exhaustion
But I have no idea how bad

Your headaches how they blister
And bleed on ever word
The day you say your hurting
I won't believe what I have heard


Scheme AXXA XXXX XXXX XBXB
Poetic Form Quatrain  (25%)
Metre 1111110 101111 11111101 1100111 111101 11111 11010100 01111101 11101110 011111 11101010 111101011 111110 011101 0111110 11011111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 476
Words 100
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 94
Words per stanza (avg) 24
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Submitted by Sproutheadedhurt on April 28, 2022

Modified by Sproutheadedhurt on April 28, 2022

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