Analysis of Summer Day's Query



In a late summer day back in August

Where we walked – hand in hand

The grass flowing in light wind around me

Waiting to catch me when I should land

And the horses which grazed the field

Free with their own reign

Glanced directly at you

And shook their regal mane

When – placed upon one royal steed –

There, sat I

Taking in the view with free

Trees and flowers rolling by

For once, I recognized, at last,

What my life had become

And decided, that to relish life,

I must never live, for anyone

To live only for myself

Is what I realized that late summer day

But beside me sat you

In a dream, whisked away

With the sun setting on the horizon

Colors melting in the sand

And we held each other tight like children,

Scared – on burning land

I mused, “We must never live for anyone”

But for you, I could display

My love and endless affection

Yet I knew I must live another day

On that late summer day back in August

Where we slept – hand in hand

The grass cushioning our bodies

Holding us with careful hands

I felt comforted – by the world

Understood what life must be

To live a life so privileged

Yet not live at all, gallantly


Scheme A B C B X D E D X F C F X X X G X H E H G B G B G H G H A B X X X C X C
Poetic Form
Metre 0011011010 111101 0110011011 101111111 00101101 11111 101011 011101 11011101 111 1000111 1010101 1111011 111101 01011101 11101110 111011 1111011101 101111 001101 1011010010 1010001 0111101110 11101 1111101110 1111101 11010010 1111110101 1111011010 111101 011001010 1011101 11100101 011111 1101110 11111100
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,232
Words 307
Sentences 1
Stanzas 36
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 36
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 24
Words per stanza (avg) 6
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Submitted by 1rmwenger on April 28, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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