Analysis of Narrative poem



Llegando a la tienda,Un vestido en la ventana
Un color tan bello, y me suelto el cabello
Una chulada le cuento a mi mama
Sino me lo puedo probar, voy a llorar

Viendo las bellezas, ideas en mi cabeza
“Me lo puedo probar, no lo voy a dañar”
El vestidor tan grande,el vestido se expande
Un vestido con brillo, color amarillo

Me queda el vestido, aunque hay otro en la lista
Tantas opciones, vestidos tan perrones
No me queda mi favorito, ya no es un quiero es un necesito
Con pensamientos tristes, me visto con otro

“Hay que bonita” escucho a mi mama
Que chulo se mira, me doy una gira
Como me siento, toda una reina
Muy lindo es, pero ese precio no lo es

Por más bonito que sea, es mucho dinero
Será un encanto pero, no me lo gano
Una exageración, dice mi madre
De un rato pa otro ya nos vamos


Scheme ABCD EDFB FEFD CDAE DADE
Poetic Form
Metre 10111111 1101101111010 101010110 101111101 111010111 1111111011 1111111 111110010 1111111111 11111 1111111111111 1111111 1101010110 1111011101 10111010010 11011011111 111010111101 1111011110 1011111 111111110
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 808
Words 161
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 122
Words per stanza (avg) 31

About this poem

its about me trying on quince dresses

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Submitted on April 26, 2022

Modified on April 27, 2023

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