Analysis of Destiny Denied
I died inside
Before I even cried
The pain it took
To rewrite my book
Will never subside
While it walks away with my bride
And the devil, stride for stride
Can't even remember my pride
The universe promised, and lied
And no matter how hard I tried
At the last second, my brain was fried
The wells of hope were dried
A lifelong purpose denied
A day away, never got to thrive
The best friend we'll ever know is Survive
Except now we're barely alive
The dread and despair have built a hive
Queen Bee-trayal sets honey aside
To feed her victims, before she serves their demise
So they can suffer and shrink into subservient flies
Serving only to think of what could've been of their lives
Had the day not come when their tongues were tied
And the love they felt could've finally been spied
And at their destiny they could've finally arrived.
Scheme | AABBAAAAAAAAACCCCADDEAAF |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 1101 011101 0111 10111 11001 11101111 0010111 11001011 0101001 01101111 101101111 011101 0111001 010110111 0111101101 01111001 010011101 11111001 110100111101 11110010101001 10101111001111 1011111101 001110010011 01110010010001 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 853 |
Words | 159 |
Sentences | 2 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 24 |
Lines Amount | 24 |
Letters per line (avg) | 28 |
Words per line (avg) | 6 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 670 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 155 |
About this poem
The pain of the most beautiful destiny never fulfilled, stings than a bee's needle when one was so close to the taste of perfection.
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Written on April 15, 2022
Submitted by Climax on April 15, 2022
Modified on May 04, 2023
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