Analysis of No More Desire Now.



I have hostility with life,
No more desire now,
The desire I ever had,
I wish no longer now,

I ever came to an agreement,
Along with conditional love,
With every aspect of my life,
There is no more feel now,

Those unpleasant days,
Coming allover the mind,
My heart was filled with discomfort,
There is no more will now,

Friends were proud of me,
They liked my way and style,
Friendship has all disappeared,
Friendly matters are no longer now........


Scheme ABXB XXAB XXXB XXXB
Poetic Form Quatrain  (25%)
Metre 11010011 110101 00101101 111101 110111010 01101001 11001111 111111 10101 10101 11111010 111111 10111 111101 101101 101011101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 452
Words 99
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 87
Words per stanza (avg) 20

About this poem

I wrote this poem long back may be during 1973 In Hindi and translated it in 2021 in the month of August. I was keeping this poem safe for my personal view but there are many sad poems are already on line then why not this too.

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Written on August 17, 2022

Submitted by brijmohanpoply01 on April 15, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Brijmohansajal

For writing this poem, I have got inspiration from manner less people, Though I can't teach them, but decided to write in this subject. First half was written and the rest half took long time. I am happy to do something in this way and show a path this way. more…

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