Analysis of cosmic soup

Griffen Vaulato 2004 (elgin)



our life
a projection of consciousness           
in the true realm of reality
there are no such things as colors and sounds
the real world is an ambiguous and ceaselessly flowing soup
ever searching for simplicity
we beg for understanding and discovery
down to the quarks and atoms, we study
for the smallest conceivable components of the universe
with the idea that by going in the realm of the infinitesimal
we shall reach the ultimate foundation
I doubt that's the case
Eternity lies in every direction
existing in a fluctuation of energy and information in an infinite void
Alive from interpretation
We plead
What is real?
When there's no such thing


Scheme ABCDECCCFGHIHJHKLM
Poetic Form
Metre 101 00101100 0011110 1111111001 0111101000100101 101010100 11101000100 1101010110 101001000101010 1001011100011000100 1110100010 11101 010010100010 0100001011000010011001 0110010 11 111 11111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 660
Words 118
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 18
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 530
Words per stanza (avg) 110

About this poem

I believe there is much more that encompasses us every day than we really believe.

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Written on October 20, 2021

Submitted by Gvaulato92043 on April 12, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Griffen Vaulato

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