Analysis of Boiled potatoes
A poem's meant to sprout out from the soul
But your flame makes me a meager mash
Boiled potatoes sprout no more than lumps of coal
It's cold, I dare not from this chamber stroll
You kindled all my love and all my cash
Now thawing seeds try to sprout from out my soul
Joy's sprouts eaten by neglect or by the moles
For I'm just a scarecrow to your meadow lashed
And my potatoes fail to grow in any hole
Hungry for your heart I hang to this pole
But your heat scalds me, so my teeth I gnash
Will these stewed up spuds sprout from out my soul?
My skin is singed but inside I'm still cold
From artificial heat I have a rash
Peeled potatoes sprout no more than bready mold
The ache of hunger makes my thinking dull
While my heart digs for tubers in the trash
Heartfelt lines should sprout from out my soul
I'm planting boiled potatoes on this grassy knoll
Scheme | ABA ABA XXA ABA CBC XBAA |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 011111101 111110101 10101111111 1111111101 1101110111 11011111111 11101011101 1110101111 010101110101 1011111111 1111111111 1111111111 1111101111 101011101 10101111101 0111011101 111111001 11111111 110101011101 |
Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 855 |
Words | 173 |
Sentences | 2 |
Stanzas | 6 |
Stanza Lengths | 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 4 |
Lines Amount | 19 |
Letters per line (avg) | 36 |
Words per line (avg) | 9 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 113 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 28 |
About this poem
The narrator, a lonely farmer from the old days, recollects a love lost, comparing it to hunger and the vain pursuits of hunger's stupor. It is inspired by the Villanelle form.
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Written on February 26, 2022
Submitted by sanderweeks on March 19, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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