Analysis of My gamer…



It started with a simple of who was looking for a team for world championship… I posted up my UID and there you were… sschopz.
We connected instantly like lost souls who were reunited after being apart for years…
We worked out where we were from and soon it became clear you from New Zealand me from Australia this was going to be fun…
We pick on each other and flirted through all 40 games.

One night you heard.. the abuse the words.. my tears.. my fears … “ popcorn moments”
We talked you said “I shouldn’t put up with it” you played extra games me that night that just to make sure I was alright.. we talked some more you tell me you want a “gamer girl” and our love started to ignite…
3 months had past and we were strong.. but then something went horribly wrong.. you were just gone…

I was lost.. empty confused and scared.. I felt like maybe you never cared.. but my gut told me that you come back and that was fact.
You almost died…. And when you told me I broke down and cried.. I love you so much

We talked some more and made plans for our life together from marriage to family and everything in between… but then once again life threw you curve ball and you left me alone with no word of why or how…

Now you say you love me and that you wish you could hold me.. but you don’t want to be with me.. your time is limited and you need to put some more distance between us..
fast forward a year and here we are still holding on.. and you know that no matter what
I will love you forever… my gamer..


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Characters 1,552
Words 311
Sentences 20
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 3, 2, 1, 3
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 89
Words per line (avg) 23
Letters per stanza (avg) 231
Words per stanza (avg) 60

About this poem

This is a poem about a man I met while gaming online..

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Written on February 02, 2022

Submitted on April 01, 2022

Modified on April 13, 2023

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