Analysis of Memory



On a cold and misty dusk,
I heard the billows roar,
over a sunken ship,
and a winter bud
fearing the shadows fall,
over the glee,
of the coming dawn,
shivered its axis off,
and, oh…
just then you left…
you left my eyes heavy to dream,
that dreamless slumber,
which kissed down,
your eyelids still;
when you were yet away,
far behind the stone
on life’s highway,
the masks,
the beginning of youth.


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Poetic Form
Metre 1010101 110101 100101 00101 10011 1001 10101 101101 01 1111 11111011 1110 111 111 110101 10101 111 01 001011
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 403
Words 88
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 19
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 16
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 304
Words per stanza (avg) 74

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Remembering a dear sibling who was lost in childhood.

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Submitted by amarjitbakhshi on March 28, 2022

Modified by amarjitbakhshi on March 28, 2022

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