Analysis of A Soul Cart Creaks

Brady Bowen 1973 (Louisiana)



As possibilities crumble to ash
around the caster-feet I bolted to my heart
these little wheels, canted, noisy, wind-wobbly.

Neutronic heaviness forced this modification-this ambulatory abomination that is dragged behind me by a chain wrapped hastily around and knotted, carefully gripped by hands covered in scar-webs.

The eyes of the watchers are fever-bright
savoring the rising mist of heartbreak
inhalation of crimson, corrosive pain
exhulting in the sweetness of my suffering
eyes heavenward but Hades birthed their joy.

I drag my soul before their gallery of sorrow
clanking links of rusty regret
make scraping noises on the stained glass
sainted floor of eternity; downtrodden ikons
in this hostility home of the cunning mind

I am weary of this shambling progress
this pilgrimage of pain
I lay myself down on the stained StStephen
he whom the wren betrayed
it’s as good a place as any.


Scheme XXA B XXCXX XXXBX XCCXA
Poetic Form
Metre 101001011 010101110111 11011101100 1111001011000001011101110111000101010011110011 0110101101 100010111 00101100101 1001011100 11110111 1111011100110 10111001 110101011 10110100101 010100110101 11101111 110011 11111011 110101 11101110
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 912
Words 160
Sentences 5
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 3, 1, 5, 5, 5
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 39
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 147
Words per stanza (avg) 29
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Written on March 19, 2022

Submitted by BradyB999 on March 19, 2022

Modified on April 10, 2023

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