Analysis of A Broken Wing



I am a bird with broken wing
I cannot fly, but I can tweet

I watched my friends flying
I can only sing with my one wing

My voice low and soft
Not to annoyed old friends with a wing

Well, well it is well to be calm
Hope and despair all in there

I am from a land of far away
I landed here with a broken wing

If anyone wish to share the gorge of life
Can only hum with soft voice

The fate and destiny can change
When kind and keen mending a broken wing

Going back to a valley with full of thorns
It would be painful with one wing

I am whispering when things get hard
I can only hum with soft voice


Scheme AX AA XA XX XA XB XA XA XB
Poetic Form
Metre 11011101 11011111 111110 111011111 11101 110111101 11111111 1001101 111011101 110110101 1101110111 1101111 01010011 1101100101 10110101111 11110111 111001111 11101111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 604
Words 138
Sentences 1
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 52
Words per stanza (avg) 14

About this poem

It is an expression related with contemplated with hardship. Especially when someone get stranded with no sufficient reason.

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Submitted by gemaneh118 on March 16, 2022

Modified on April 20, 2023

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