Analysis of Our Becoming (s)
A scar that cannot be seen!
Quietly viewed while the yapping nurse takes a look before she cleans.
When?
People often arrive unfairly!
It could either be husband or wife.
The license of.
Marriage was previously yet jointly signed.
For both to not only share but build an extended life.
Yesterday was calm, steady!
Unleashed without cause for the next day.
Distance has dismantled so much!
Neither gain nor cease to retain a touch,
Same goals but no way of intention(s).
X-Rayed thoroughness may come at a cost.
Known as unchartered or lost!
Of our scrapings to avoid any type of doom.
How are we to continue this journey as bride & groom?
Scheme | ABCDEFGEDHIIJKLMM |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 0111011 100110111010111 1 101001010 111011011 0101 10110001101 11111011110101 101110 010111011 10101011 1011110101 1111110101 1110011101 1101011 1101010110111 1111010110111 |
Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 638 |
Words | 129 |
Sentences | 16 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 17 |
Lines Amount | 17 |
Letters per line (avg) | 30 |
Words per line (avg) | 7 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 504 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 113 |
About this poem
As usual each poem written myself involves the way I feel at the moment. Whereas this particular one has to do with an inner me, sadness. Which is preferred not to be unleashed upon others nor a tell all.
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Written on February 07, 2022
Submitted on March 16, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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