Analysis of "(Take and try)"



The chance thou see is merely the one;
the road thou take is merely the one
It is the challenge,it is the time
It never blows until you blows  it
Thou may have seen many stars,
                         But
There's merely one for you
 Who deserves you
 When thou don't take and try
 When thou lose,you're sad
 When thou win,you shine
 No matter what it takes to try
 Just make it happen
 Au revoir thy past
            And
Take the chance
Try thy fate
As thou waver,
As thou trap
The victorious shall be you.


Scheme AABCDEFFGHIGAJKLMNOF
Poetic Form Tetractys  (35%)
Etheree  (25%)
Metre 011111001 011111001 1101101 110101111 1111101 1 110111 1011 111101 1111 1111 11011111 11110 10111 0 101 111 1110 111 00100111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 508
Words 99
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 361
Words per stanza (avg) 93

About this poem

It's about encouragement to the vague man of hope.The man wobbling,but never giving up and trying to make the spark ever lasting.

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Submitted by mirrind94 on March 14, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Mir B.Z Rind

I am an enthusiast to the poetic world yet a novice.i want to make every individual to feel themselves in their dept to know their potential and agility.As a young writer and a poet my primary aim is to make a big change to every individual.I am yet 16 and am struggling to make my work marked in history. more…

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