Analysis of Foot In Mouth



When words spoken,
Are left to go unheard.
Either gone ignored or disputed.
To scrutinize the speaker.
Leaving nothing else,
One can possible say another way.
In the hopes this attempt,
Clarifies the content of delivery.
And this should make a difference.
But to a stubborn mind, doesn't!
There is always another option to take.
Go away to let life be the teacher.
Without words heard to hear,
Lessons to learn for anyone done.
Making it obvious,
From one ear to the other...
A mind to use has not yet for them come.

Although,
Eventually...
Anyone defiant like this,
Has no other choice.
But to pay attention to what life teaches.
Keeping nonsense,
Habitually coming out of a mouth...
To close it tight.
Leaving this experience,
Seldom to happen over night.

'Are you okay?
So accustomed I had been,
Prepared to listen...
To your unsolicited opinions given.
And now...
I witness you have begun to ask,
More questions.
What has happened?'

'I found my foot in my mouth.
More too often than I realized.'

'What a revelation that must have been.
At least you became aware.
And made conscious of it.'

'There is nothing like being made a fool.
To then be stupid enough to prove it.
And provide the evidence.'

'Well...
We all make mistakes.'

'Yeah.
I know that now.
But...
To defend and deny them made?
What fool does that?'

'That's a good question.
However...
There is one thing I must admit.
Few are the fools who will confess,
Remaining foolish...
Has obtained them wisdom.
And a quality of life without truth to face.'

'So...
You also have been,
Stupid, dumb, thoughtless and ignorant?'

'Hey, hey...whoa.
Hold up here.
Remember,
This is not about me.
Foolish?
I may have been.
And besides...
This is your awakening.
All that other stuff?
I admire your willingness to address it.'


Scheme AXXBXCXDEFXBGAXBH IDXXXXJKEK CLAAMXXX JX LXN XNE XX XMXXX ABNXOHX ILF XGBDOLXXXN
Poetic Form Etheree  (31%)
Tetractys  (21%)
Metre 1110 111101 101011010 110010 10101 1110010101 001101 1001010100 01110100 11010110 1110101011 1011111010 011111 10111101 101100 1111010 0111111111 1 01000 1001011 11101 11101011110 1010 01000101101 1111 1010100 10110101 111 1010111 01110 11010001010 01 110110111 110 1110 1111011 11101110 100101111 1110101 011011 1110110101 1111001111 0010100 1 11101 1 1111 1 10100111 1111 10110 10 11111101 11011101 01010 101110 001001101111 1 11011 101100100 11 111 010 111011 10 1111 001 1110100 11101 1011100111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,784
Words 390
Sentences 58
Stanzas 11
Stanza Lengths 17, 10, 8, 2, 3, 3, 2, 5, 7, 3, 10
Lines Amount 70
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 122
Words per stanza (avg) 28
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Submitted by lpahtillah on March 12, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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