Analysis of You Cant Write a Poem about McDonald's
“You Canʼt Write a Poem about McDonaldʼs”
Noon. Hunger is the only thing
singing in my belly.
I walk through the blossoming cherry trees
on the library mall,
past the young couple coupling,
by the crazy fanatic
screaming doom and salvation
at a sensation-hungry crowd,
to the Lake Street McDonaldʼs.
It is crowded, the lines long and sluggish.
I wait in the greasy air.
All around me people are eating--
the sizzle of conversation,
the salty odor of sweat,
the warm flesh pressing out of hip huggers and halter tops.
When I finally reach the cash register,
the counter girl is crisp as a pickle,
her fingers thin as french fries,
her face brown as a bun.
Suddenly I understand cannibalism.
As I reach for her,
she breaks into pieces
wrapped neat and packaged for take-out.
Iʼm thinking, how amazing it is
to live in this country, how easy
it is to be filled.
We leave together, her warm aroma
close at my side.
I walk back through the cherry trees
blossoming up into pies,
the young couple frying in
the hot, oily sun,
the crowd eating up the fanatic
singing, my ear, my eye, my tongue
fat with wonder
of this hungry world.
Scheme | ABCDEBFGHAIJBGKLMNOGPMQRSCTUVDOWGFXMY |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 1111010010101 11010101 100110 1110100101 10101 1011010 1010010 1010010 10010101 10110101 1110011010 1100101 101110110 0101010 0101011 0111011110101 11100101100 0101111010 0101111 011101 1001011000 11110 110110 11010111 1110101011 110110110 11111 1101001010 1111 11110101 1001011 0110100 01101 011010010 10111111 1110 11101 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 1,131 |
Words | 225 |
Sentences | 12 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 37 |
Lines Amount | 37 |
Letters per line (avg) | 24 |
Words per line (avg) | 6 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 879 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 204 |
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Written on December 30, 2021
Submitted by ronald.wallace on February 10, 2022
Modified on April 26, 2023
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