Analysis of Pain
Laela mj 2003 (Batang)
Window of the heart and house stare
A footstep who look exhausted
Drown sweat alot of anxiety
Just because uncertainty and some
Nothingness which always follow behind a
loneliness
The desperate very clear to be spoken
From the ear of a neighboor
Ah... neighboor
No wonder why selfharm is so easy
And write a story make me miserable
On the sea side, try to search
Desire of peacefull
So true, wave sound immediately
Block all overthink last week
Unfortunetly, memory isn't easy to be erasse
He ask me about love and air
Like a doubtfull poem
Among nescience and selfishness1
| Scheme | ABCDEFGAACHIHCJFADF |
|---|---|
| Poetic Form | |
| Metre | 10101011 0111010 110110100 101010001 1001110010 100 0101011110 101101 11 110111110 01010111000 1011111 01011 111101000 11111 11001010111 11101101 10110 0110100 |
| Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
| Characters | 580 |
| Words | 104 |
| Sentences | 2 |
| Stanzas | 1 |
| Stanza Lengths | 19 |
| Lines Amount | 19 |
| Letters per line (avg) | 25 |
| Words per line (avg) | 5 |
| Letters per stanza (avg) | 467 |
| Words per stanza (avg) | 101 |
About this poem
I have so much pain for my entire life,, for long long time i dont know what makes me feel happy. But actually im not that sad, I realize that im just so lonely
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Written on August 02, 2022
Submitted by Elrose_ on February 10, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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