Analysis of Neighborhood Hummingbird



This is your friend Hummingbird
 my motto is to hume
 You make a hbit of lisenting
I am impressed and moved
by what I heard last night
your song on rainbow:

"Above the sea
Beneath the sky
Somewhere in between
There is a rainbow

When all colors combined
Blended together
That is a formation of rainbow
Magnifying the beauty of nature

Unreachable tower up above so high
Watching in a distance is a delight
Every child wishing to touch you rainbow!"

You are right, too high to reach and touch it
who knows if you study hard and become
Astronaut will be able even to walk on the
moon. If you study hard will take to
"unreachable tower,"
I will get back with my humming soon.


Scheme XXAXBC XAXC XDCD XBC XXXXDX
Poetic Form
Metre 111110 110111 110111 110101 111111 1111 0101 0101 1001 1101 111001 10010 11001011 100010110 01001010111 1000101001 1001101111 1111111011 1111101001 101110101110 111101111 010010 111111101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 677
Words 136
Sentences 3
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 6, 4, 4, 3, 6
Lines Amount 23
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 107
Words per stanza (avg) 25

About this poem

This poem is in series of one to twenty three, written to inspire children. My character is Hummingbird.

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Submitted by yeshigemaneh on February 02, 2022

Modified on April 23, 2023

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Yeshiembet/Yeshi Gemaneh

I was born and raised in Eastern parts of Ethiopia in the city of Harar, I was attended elementary and secondary school in Haile Selassie Day School in Addis Ababa. I remember when I was in grade 7, I won a prize for being the best student - a book "Alice in Wonderland," from Emperor Haile Selassie, King of Ethiopia. From High School, I was rewarded scholarship for higher education on City Administration, and Social Studies in the cities of Luneburg, Aachen and Dusseldorf, West Germany. I had also a humble opportunity of learning Western culture, German language and associated closely with hard working German people. My fascination and love for poems goes many years back, when I was in grade 7, one day our English teacher read, "Twinkle, Twinkle Little Star ...," since then I wanted to write poems. In 1995 I had an opportunity to join, The International Library of Poetry. Since then I expressed on variety of topics or titles; I call it my ABC poems. I see my life experience as my greatest teacher, and I love to share what I have had acquired over many years with others, however, every day I am a learner. It is my strong belief and philosophy, if a person has interest and willpower can achieve his goal. As a child, my important figure was my mother. She taught me the Ethiopian alphabets, and love of family and surroundings that helped me to see many things positively. Unfortunately, despite my wonderful childhood experience and growth; I encountered many ups and down of life journey that too taught me a lesson. Now, I am in my senior years being old is wisdom. There is a saying, "quitters are losers," and I don't want that to apply on me. more…

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