Analysis of Fly on the Window

Daniel A Freedman 1950 (New London CT.)



Fly on the window, it died long ago
The front door was open
But it didn't know.
What spark of energy, flows in a fly
That makes it so fearless
Of having to die?
Against the pane we can't escape
Don't build your world
With a wall of hate.


Scheme ABACDCEFG
Poetic Form Nonet (33%)
Metre 1101011101 011110 11101 1111001001 111110 11011 01011101 1111 10111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 238
Words 52
Sentences 3
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 9
Lines Amount 9
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 181
Words per stanza (avg) 49

About this poem

This is one of the first poems that I wrote about a little fly that died on our living room window.

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Written on October 20, 1960

Submitted by danielafreedman on February 27, 2022

Modified on April 06, 2023

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Daniel A Freedman

Daniel A. Freedman is an American poet who is a member of the New England Poetry Society. He has one published book of poetry "Midbar Negev Nights". He has written for several different Zines including: BURP, Fell Swoop, Backroom Poets and Oz Burp. more…

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