Analysis of Right Size



Her size is to big, too much for you to handle.
 You make her feel like you anit proud of her body, it makes her heart melt like a candle.
It's hard for you to even, use your big brown skin hands to touch and caress all around her body, it's no scandal.
She can't even lay on you because once her head lays on your chest, she feels like she's on a cruise boat because you move around like a ocean wave so it's uncomfortable.
All she wants, is to get close to you without fear.
She wants you to be able to hold her, want her and for you to care.
 It breaks her heart so much, that its drowning in tears.
 The things you say, makes her feel ashamed of her body throughout the years.
Seems, like her body is to ugly for you to touch and this isn't fair.
It's always a complaint about this and that.
Either, she's too close to you because the bed sinks in.
The way she breathe, is too much for you.
The way she lay, she's to close to you.
Maybe, she's just not the right size women for you.


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Poetic Form
Metre 011111111110 110111111010110111010 1111110111111110011010101110 111011101101111111111011011101101011101000 111111111011 11111101101001111 110111111001 01111010110100101 110101110111101101 1100101101 1011111010110 011111111 011111111 101110111011
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 1,014
Words 220
Sentences 15
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 14
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 53
Words per line (avg) 14
Letters per stanza (avg) 746
Words per stanza (avg) 200
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Modified by resume0809 on March 20, 2022

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Poetic ER

Born and raised in Boston, Massachusetts. I started writing poems as an outlet, when I was 11 years old and just continued on. I think I have evolved to spoken word. Soon hoping to have several short books of life. more…

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