Analysis of Emptiness.

Heather Lydia Thornhill 1981 (Manchester)



I wait for you.
I wait until two.
The night grows blacker.
I dont know what to do.
You walked far this night.
You walked out of sight.
My loneliness eats at me.
Not quenched by tea and treats.
I watch no more.
No more am I looking forward.
I lie still. Words broken in two.
Eyes closed but mind open I wonder if we are through.
I wait for you.


Scheme AabaccdefgaaA
Poetic Form
Metre 1111 11011 01110 111111 11111 11111 1100111 111101 1111 11111010 11111001 1111101101111 1111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 343
Words 83
Sentences 14
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 13
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 259
Words per stanza (avg) 71
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Written on March 01, 2022

Submitted by heathert.34240 on March 01, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Heather Lydia Thornhill

Moods and mindsets poetry. Published. Book in progress: Don't talk rot. more…

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