Analysis of Be still

Kaleb Phipps 1996 (Lebanon, Ky)



Not going to lie I’m wanting to die. Holding all these tears I’m wanting to get rid of all these years. I want to be in motion but I’m just dealing with these emotions. Siting in my room today I’m ready for God to take me away. After the screams and tears I’m ready to lose my years… Then I hear a voice say “Be still for I am here”.


Scheme A
Poetic Form
Metre 110111101110111110111111111110101111011010100110111011111011001011101111111011111111
Characters 350
Words 70
Sentences 6
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 1
Lines Amount 1
Letters per line (avg) 251
Words per line (avg) 70
Letters per stanza (avg) 251
Words per stanza (avg) 70

About this poem

This poem is about me going through hard times, and actually coming close to ending my life. But something happened.

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Written on September 24, 2020

Submitted by kaleb_p on February 27, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Kaleb Phipps

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