Analysis of I need a cure-but you destroyed it
I know there’s a cure
For my sadness and pain
Behind my smiling face,
Is a girl who got sick
And it wasn’t a virus
Like COVID or the Black Plague
It’s something no one can see
At first it wasn’t easy to hide
The symptoms were obvious
But once u realized what was going on,
I hid. I hid every last sign.
I found a false cure
Every time I say I’m ok,
I get further from it
And I guess I need help
But it feels like no one cares about me
They only want power
They don’t give two seconds
Longer than necessary to help me
As long as I LOOK 100%
Then they’ve done their job
Get the satisfaction of doing a good
When they really made it worse
Only worsening the curse
And sending my cure,
Far far away from me
I don’t have a cure anymore
Scheme | ABCDEFGHEIJAKLMGNOGPQRSSAGT |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 11101 111001 011101 101111 011010 111011 1101111 11111011 0100100 1111011101 111110011 11011 100111111 111011 011111 1111111011 110110 111110 101100111 11111 11111 1001011001 1110111 1010001 01011 110111 1110101 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 803 |
Words | 157 |
Sentences | 3 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 27 |
Lines Amount | 27 |
Letters per line (avg) | 21 |
Words per line (avg) | 6 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 564 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 152 |
About this poem
I wrote this poem about ow I need help getting better, but no one cares about ME, they just want the PROBLEM gone
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Written on February 25, 2022
Submitted by Lilliandushane07 on February 25, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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