Analysis of Oh, my heart!



From the dripping blood
on murder of desires
Nurtured the heart
to flourish with satires

Now all emotions are mock
and laughter is fake
everything is superficial
for my heart’s sake

Like an innocent child
heart is happy with possessions
like the lifeless toys
that do not play with emotions

Devoid of feelings
How can happy be the heart
Am fooling myself
Deceiving the poor heart.


Scheme XABA XCXC XDXD XBXB
Poetic Form Quatrain 
Metre 10101 1101010 1001 110110 1101011 01011 101010 1111 111001 11101010 10101 11111010 01110 1110101 1101 010011
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 400
Words 84
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 78
Words per stanza (avg) 17
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Submitted by archana_a on February 23, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Archana Agarwal

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