Analysis of A DIFFERENT POINT OF VIEW
Our love she lit on fire,
Without a second thought.
She has no idea of the
Lesson that she taught.
It is surely one,
I will never forget.
Allowed myself to love her,
My biggest regret.
My tormented soul meant nothing,
Neither one cared if I survived.
My character's will to live,
The reason I'm still alive.
The person I used to be,
Nothing remains.
A much wiser person,
Came from the flames.
Some days are a struggle,
Just to get out of bed.
These demons rule my heart
and control my head.
I believe in myself,
Beyond a shadow of a doubt.
I was worried, I thought
There is no way out.
I should have prepared myself,
For that dreadful day.
Without a word,
She just ran away.
I still find it hard to breathe,
A weight upon my chest.
She lied when she said,
She did her very best.
If I could have a do over,
I would pass this time.
It is fragmented memories,
That destroys my mind.
My life is complete and
Utter mess.
She is oblivious to my pain,
She couldn't care less.
For me, loving her
Felt right and true.
She never mentioned,
She had a different point of view.
Scheme | ABXB CDAD XXEE XXCX XFXF GHBH GIXI XJFJ AXXX KLXL AMKM |
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Poetic Form | Quatrain (73%) |
Metre | 10111110 010101 11101010 10111 11101 111001 011110 11001 1101110 10111101 1100111 0101101 0101111 1001 011010 1101 111010 111111 110111 00111 10101 0101101 111011 11111 111011 11101 0101 11101 1111111 010111 11111 110101 11110110 11111 11100100 10111 111010 101 110100111 11011 11100 1101 11010 110100111 |
Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 1,159 |
Words | 258 |
Sentences | 23 |
Stanzas | 11 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4 |
Lines Amount | 44 |
Letters per line (avg) | 19 |
Words per line (avg) | 5 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 74 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 19 |
About this poem
Heartbreak, betrayal, lies and pain...
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Written on February 14, 2022
Submitted by Turbo1904 on February 14, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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